My first loop

Hi! Newcomer here. I've uploaded my very first loop to z0r. The loop is not accepted yet (I feel stupidly optimistic today!)
So I leave here an external link to the loop for your viewing pleasure (I feel stupidly optimistic and redundant today)...
Dangerous period

Please, Don't be very cruel with me.

Please, Don't be very cruel with me.

I'll think about it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)